篇一：2017高考英语一轮复习 专题突破21 短文改错之通读全文,纠正逻辑错误
专题技能突破(21)
短文改错之通读全文，纠正逻辑错误
【技能讲解】 通读全文，了解短文的大意， 把握全篇的时态、人称、非谓语的主被动关系及行文逻辑。有时孤立的分析某个句子，其结构正确、语义通顺，无错可改，但如果联系上下文，便会发现该句中有不合逻辑的地方，需做出改正。
典例剖析
1.[2015·课标全国卷Ⅰ]When I was a child, I hoped to live in the city. I think I would be happy there.
[答案] think→thought 考查时态。由was, hoped和would be可知，此处叙述的是过去的事情，故用一般过去时。
2．[2015·课标全国卷Ⅰ]We must find ways to protect your environment.If we fail to do so, we'll live to regret it.
[答案] your→our或the 考查代词。根据上下句语境，我们应该保护我们的环境，故改为our, 也可用定冠词the来限定。
3．[2015·浙江高考]In the mornings, it was full of students exercising. The view from the back of the classroom is also splendid. Close to the school there was a beautiful park with many trees around it.
[答案] is→was 考查时态。全文用的都是过去时，所以把is改为was。
4．In fact, I don't like to go anymore, so I'm afraid I'll lose their friendship. What do you think I should do? Ifyou were me, would you talk to him?
[答案] him→them 考查代词。根据上下文及their一词可知，此处代词指代错误，故将him改为them。
5．On average, there are 800 tornadoes in the US each year, cause about 80 deaths and 1,500 injuries.
[答案] cause→causing 考查非谓语动词。causing作结果状语，表“自然而然的结果”用现在分词。
技能演练
短文改错
(一)
A man has been waiting at the bus stop. After a few minutes later, the bus arrived and did not stop. The man thought it would stop a little far, so he started running after the bus. Fortunately, the bus never stopped. The man kept follow the bus until he arrived home. The man was very glad that he could save bit of money. He happily told his wife, “Honey, today I ran after the buses until getting home. I didn't have to pay the fee.” Surprisingly, the wife blamed her, “You fool! Do you know how many you could save if you ran after a taxi？”
答案： A man has been waiting at the bus stop. After a few minutes later＼, the bus
had
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started running after the bus. Fortunately， the bus never stopped. The man kept Unfortunately
follow the bus until he arrived home. The man was very glad that he could save ∧ followingabit of money. He happily told his wife, “Honey, today I ran after the buses until
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getting home. I didn't have to pay the fee.” Surprisingly, the wife blamed her，
him
“You fool! Do you know how many you could save if you ran after a taxi？”
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(二)
Last week my parents and I took a two-days trip to Emei Mountain in Sichuan. As everyone knows, it's famous mountain with all kinds of plants and animals. The weather was fine. It was about noon that we arrived at the foot of the mountain. The three of them were very excited. As we climbed the mountain, we fed monkeys, visiting temples and told stories. On the way up I was busy taking picture since the scenery was so beautifully. The time passes quickly. Evening came. We spent the night in a hotel at the top of the mountain. The food was expensive and the service was good. I was so tired that I fell asleep at the moment my head touched the pillow.
答案：
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the scenery was so beautifully. The time passes quickly. Evening came. We spent beautifulpassed
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篇二：2017版高考英语一轮总复习 创新模拟题分类试题 专题15 短文改错
专题十五 短文改错
模拟精选题
Passage 1 (2016·山西重点中学协作体模拟)
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Having a good teacher do mean a lot to us students and I am lucky enough to have the one—Miss Brown, my English teacher.
Miss Brown is a charming lady always worn a big smile on her face. In the first class she introduced her and then asked us to say something about ourselves with English. When it was my turn, I felt too shy and fearful that I didn’t dare to say a word. She came up to me and said, “Don’t afraid. You can make it. Just have a try.” At last, I did it quite good. She praised me for that I had done. Never shall I forgot my first English class in senior high school.
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Passage 2 (2016·汉中市二次质检)
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均限一词。
2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Smiling is auniversal language but can give us courage, confidence and comfort. I still remember how upset I am when it was my turn to recite a poem before class.Feel nervous and shy, I forgot almost everything. I decided to give up, but all my classmates, especial my teacher kept smiling at me encouragingly. Their smile warmed me so much that I got over the difficulty and eventually made it up. I think smiling not only makes us happy but also help build up our confidence. Furthermore, they will improve the relationship between us. It is smiling that brings harmony us. Only when you smile at the world does the world smile at you. Therefore, keep smiling and show your best to the world.
答案
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Passage 3 (2016·临沂一模)
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
This morning I saw off my aunt at railway station.There were many passenger in the waiting room.I saw an old lady crying sad because she had lost her ticket and not able to afford another one.I was thinking about helping her when a man come up to comfort her.Then he bought her a ticket with his own money.The old Lady was so moving that she could hardly say a word.She grasped his hand and asked for his name or address.But he only smile and said，“It’s my pleasure.” Then he left away quickly.I was greatly moved by such a man he warmed others with his love.
答案
This morning I saw off my aunt at the? railway station.There were many passengerpassengers
sadin the waiting room.I saw an old lady crying she had lost her ticket and sadly
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Passage 4 (2016·株洲市质检)
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Hi Lana，
I am 61 years old and I am fromNew Zealand. I start teaching in China last February.I decided that I reached 60 years I would like to do something different. I was lucky to have got a degree in English, that helped me find a job as a teacher in China. Now I work with two Canadian teacher. One, 57, has been here for four years, and the other, 63, have been teaching here for 6 years. He married with a lovely Chinese lady. The Chinese people are hard－working but the students are so willing to learn.
How an interesting country to live in!
I feel safer here than anywhere I lived. I have found her tips on teaching so usefully.
Thank you!
Dave
答案
Hi Lana，
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February.I decided that ?when I reached 60 years I would like to do something different.
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usefullyuseful
Thank you!
Dave
Passage 5 (2016·宁夏六盘山二模)
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear Joe，
Thanks for you mail. I’m glad to know you were interested in the 2017 Florida Winter Camp. It will be held from January 27 to February 13, during that time you will get a wonderful experience. You will have chances to improve your speaking English in the courses provided. Also, activity are arranged for you to spend weekends together with your host family, but you can learn American English in authentic situations. However, a trip to the local Disneyland will certain add up the fun of the camp. Join in the camp and you will have the knowledge of American culture and life. You are sure to benefit from it.
Yours truly，
Li Hua
答案
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篇三：2017版高考英语一轮总复习 高考AB卷分类试题 专题15 短文改错
专题十五 短文改错
2016～2012年各省市高考题
A卷 全国卷
Passage 1 (2016·全国Ⅰ)
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
My uncle is the owner of a restaurant close to that I live.Though not very big，but the Restaurant is popular in our area .It is always crowded with customers at meal times.Some People even had to wait outside.My uncle tells me that the key to his success is honest.Every day he makes sure that fresh vegetables or high quality oil are using for cooking.My uncle says that he never dreams becoming rich in the short period of time.Instead，he hopes that our business will grow steady.
答案
thatMy uncle is the owner of a restaurant close to I live.Though not very big，where
hadtimes.Some people even have
honestorsuccess is day he makes sure that fresh vegetables quality oil honestyand
using for cooking.My uncle says that he never dreams becoming rich in usedof/about
theoursteady，he hopes that . ahissteadily?
1．that→where [考查宾语从句的连词用法。由句子结构可知，介词to之后为宾语从句。从句谓语是不及物动词live。故用where引导。]
2．去掉but [考查从属连词与并列连词。从属连词though不可与并列连词but连用。]
3．had→ have [考查语境中的时态运用。根据上下文语境可知此处要用一般现在时。]
4．honest→ honesty [考查名词作表语。由句意“他成功的关键是诚信”可知应当用名词形式。]
5．or→and [考查并列连词的用法。根据句意可知二者之间为并列关系而非选择关系。]
6．using→used [考查固定短语的用法。be used for“用来做”，为固定短语。]
7．在dreams之后加上of或about [考查短语动词。固定短语dream of/about (doing) sth.的意思是“梦想做某事”。]
8．the→a [考查代词的用法。in a short period of time为固定词组，意思是“短时间内”。]
9．our→his [考查冠词的用法。短文介绍了my uncle诚信经营餐馆的事情，故将our改为his。]
10．steady→steadily [考查副词的用法。修饰谓语动词用副词。]
Passage 2 (2016·全国Ⅱ)
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
删除：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
The summer holiday is coming.My classmates and I are talking about how to do during the holiday.We can chose between staying at home and take a trip.If we stay at home, it is comfortable but there is no need to spend money.But in that case, we will learn little about world.If we go on a trip abroad, we can broaden your view and gain knowledges we cannot get from books.Some classmates suggest we can go to places of interest nearby.I thought that it is a good idea.It does not cost many, yet we can still learn a lot. 答案
howThe summer holiday is coming.My classmates and I are talking to do during what
chosetakethe holiday.We between staying at home and a trip.If we stay at home, choosetaking
butit is comfortable and
little about the? world.If we go on a trip abroad, we can broaden yourour
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thoughtmanyplaces of interest nearby.I that it is a good idea.It does not ， yet thinkmuch
we can still learn a lot.
1．how→what [考查疑问词的用法。我和同学正在谈论假期里做什么。固定表达what to do，如果用how结构为how to do sth.]
2．chose→choose [考查动词形式。根据语法知识可知，情态动词can后要用动词原形。]
3．take→taking [考查非谓语动词的用法。此处为between...and...结构，根据前面的staying at home可知，此处也要用动名词形式，与前面保持一致。]
4．but→and [考查连词的用法。如果呆在家里，感觉舒适，还不花钱。根据句意可知，此处应是并列关系，而不是转折关系。]
5．world前加the [考查定冠词的用法。此处特指我们所生活的这个世界。]
6．your→our [考查形容词性物主代词的用法。根据前面的主语we可知，此处要用our，表示“我们能够开阔我们的视野”。]
7．knowledges→knowledge [考查不可数名词的用法。knowledge为不可数名词，没有复数形式。]
8．去掉can或can→should [考查虚拟语气。suggest表示“建议”，后面的宾语从句要用should do形式，should可以省略，故答案有两种改法。]
9．thought→think [考查一般现在时的用法。我认为这是一个好主意。根据上下文可知，此处并不是过去的看法，而是现在的看法。]
10．many→much [考查代词的用法。这样不会花很多钱。cost much花费很多。此处也可理解为much money的省略。]
Passage 3 (2016·全国Ⅲ)
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
The teenage year from 13 to 19 were the most difficult time for me.They were also the best and worse years in my life.At the first，I thought I knew everything and could make decisions by yourself.However，my parents didn’t seem to think such.They always tell me what to do and how to do it.At one time ，I ever felt my parents couldn’t understand me so I hoped I could be freely from them.I showed them I was independent by wear strange clothes.Now I am leaving home to college.At last，I will be on my own，but I still want to have my parents to turn to whenever need help.
答案
yearThe from 13 to 19 were the most difficult time for me.They were also years
worsethe best and years in my life.At ，I thought I knew everything and could worst
yourselfsuchmake decisions by ，my parents didn’t seem to think .They always myselfso
tell，I ever felt my parents couldn’t told
freelyunderstand me so I hoped I could be from them.I showed them I was independent free
weartoclothes.Now I am leaving home last，I will be on my wearingfor
?own，but I still want to have my parents to turn to whenever need help. I
【语篇导读】 本文主要讲述了青少与父母之间的关系。
1．year→years [此处指13～19 岁的年龄，故用复数。]
2．worse→worst [与前面的best并列，此处应用最高级。]
3．去掉the [at first 固定短语。]
4．yourself→myself [根据句意，此处指“我自己”。]
5．such→so [so 指已经提到的事。]
6．tell→told [此处应用过去时态。]
7．freely→free [此处应用形容词作表语。]
8．wear→wearing [此处用动名词作介词的宾语。]
9．to→for [固定搭配 leave for 去??。]
10．whenever后加I [whenever引导状语从句，从句缺少主语I。]
Passage 4 (2015·新课标全国Ⅰ)
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(﹨)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
When I was a child，I hoped to live in the city.I think I would be happy there.Now I am living in a city，but I miss my home in countryside.There the air is clean or the mountains are green.Unfortunately，on the development of industrialization，the environment has been polluted.Lots of studies have been shown that global warming has already become a very seriously problem.The airs we breathe in is getting dirtier and dirtier.Much rare animals are dying out.We must found ways to protect your environment.If we fail to do so，we’ll live to regret it.
答案
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oronmountains are green.Unfortunately，development of industrialization，andwith
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Muchfoundyour rare animals are dying out.We must ways to protect Manyfindour/the
environment.If we fail to do so，we’ll live to regret it.
1．think→thought [考查动词的时态。根据前面一句可知，这是发生在小时候的事情，故用一般过去时态。]
2．countryside前加the [考查冠词的用法。in the countryside (在乡村)为固定短语。]
3．or→and [考查并列词的用法。那儿的空气洁净，群山葱绿。由句意可知两个分句之间显然为并列关系，而非选择关系。]
4．on→with [考查介词的用法。with the development of...为一固定短语，意思是“随着??的发展”。]
《2017高考英语一轮短文改错复习题有解析》出自：百味书屋
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