篇一：高考作文辅导
高考作文
“你可以选择穿越沙漠的道路和方式，所以你是自由的；你必须穿越这片沙漠，所以你又是不自由的。”今天上午，语文考试结束后，@上海国子监微博第一时间公布了2014上海高考（微博）语文作文题。多位高三语文教师就此题目进行解读。 “沙漠”象喻“人生困境”
复旦附中语文特级教师黄荣华认为，今年的作文题目是一道“两概念”类的材料题，是一道正常的、老师们都在关注的题型。但从审题的角度来看，与往年略有难度的是“沙漠”具有象喻性，即人生的困境。题目中的“可以选择”表示一种或然性，而后半段的“必须”则表达必然性。
黄荣华认为，作文题目所要表达的核心意思与古罗马诗人贺拉斯的诗句：“无论风暴将我带到什么岸边，我都将以主人身份上岸”相吻合。即命运的必然性和人的主动性，虽然人生必然会遇到困境，但我们可以化被动为主动，化约束(人生困境)为自由(人生坦途)。 从写作的角度来看，黄荣华认为，考生们既可以从自由的角度切入，选择最适合的方式穿越困境来写；也可以从约束的角度来写，关注困境的存在，不要迷信道路和方法；还可以将两个角度融合在一起，即化约束为自由。
题目思辨性强既自由又有限制
交大附中嘉定分校语文组长申玲娣老师认为，今年的作文题目一如上海卷作文的命题理念：既自由又有限制，且有很强的思辨性。
“人生乃至社会的诸多方面都是如此，我们有相对的自由，又有不得以的苦衷。”申玲娣说，必须穿越沙漠可以视为喻体，本体可以是人生社会各个层面各个领域。
申玲娣认为，自由的选材如作文的寓意一样可以自由选择，但是又脱不开材料关键词的限制。而辩证则体现在“道路与方式的自由”与“必须穿越的不自由”上，以及“必须穿过的不自由”亦可以辩证看待。
她举例，教育、成长、生活、社会带给个体的种种约束是被动接受的箍咒，也是动力和激发潜能的源泉；再比如，带着镣铐跳舞，却可以舞出最美丽的风姿，源于充满个性的道路，处事方式的睿智。
申玲娣认为，这道作文题目让我们看到了成长更为关键的影响因素，那便是每个人的价值选择与信念坚持，这自由赋予每个人梦想开花的机会，无论在沙漠亦或绿洲。 2014年安徽高考名师点评:作文审题角度难度降低
人民网合肥6月7日电(记者 刘颖)6月7日上午11时许，2014年安徽省作文题出炉：剧本修改表演艺术家和剧作家谁说了算，自选角度写800字作文。人民网安徽频道记者第一时间电话采访了宿州市宿城一中语文老师张海松。张海松解析称，今年的安徽高考作文材料新颖、写作角度很多，与往年相比，难度有所降低。
根据安徽省国家教育考试院公布的最新信息，2014年安徽省高考作文题为：
阅读下面的材料，根据要求写一篇不少于800字的文章。
一位表演艺术家和一位剧作家就演员改动剧本台词一事，发表了不同的意见。表演艺术家说：演员是在演戏，不是念剧本，可以根据表演的需要改动台词。
剧作家说：剧本是一剧之本，体现了作者的艺术追求；如果演员随意改动台词，就可能违背创作的原意。
要求选好角度，确定立意，明确文体（诗歌除外），自拟标题；不要脱离材料内容及含意的范围作文；不要套作，不得抄袭，不得透露个人相关信息；书写规范，正确使用标点符号。
多名考生告诉人民网安徽频道记者，语文题难度还好，比去年试题简单，但作文较绕，不好写。
宿城一中语文老师张海松称，今年安徽省高考作文材料很新颖，关注的虽然是娱乐圈的问题，但是与现实联系很紧密，需要有很活思维，写作角度很多。
“较去年安徽高考作文，应该说从审题角度来说，难度降低了。”张海松认为，这段材料中表演艺术家和剧作家其实是社会中不同人之间复杂关系的展示，考生可以从尊重和坚守道德底线这两个角度去写。
张海松说，从表演艺术家的角度来说，可以改，也可以不改。表演艺术家要改，可能是因为剧本不好，或者是因为违背了表演艺术家的底线。不改，有可能是对表演艺术家的挑战，但是又尊重了剧作家和剧本。
从剧作家和表演艺术家冲突角度，是不是可以认为，表演艺术家挑战剧作家，是对权威态度的不唯命是从。
山东卷作文题：颠覆传统，鼓励自由发挥
6月7日中午12点，今年的高考语文考试刚结束， 2014高考作文题就纷纷新鲜出炉了!而在众多考题中，山东省的高考作文题则得到了众多网友的好评。
窗口下有一个画框，从窗户看出去不同人看不同风景，有的人看到了静，有的人看到了闹;有的人看到了雅，有的人看到了俗;有的人看到了好，有的人看到了不好。你能看到什么?请问您看到这个题目又有什么想法呢?
要求：①选准角度，自定立意。②自拟题目。③除诗歌处，文体不限，文体特征鲜明。④不要脱离材料内容及含义范围。
第一眼看到这个题目，就觉得有意义有新意。推开窗子看世界，是开放，是勇气，是打破，是瞻望，也是自我救赎的方式。
一、秉承传统：题目简练，寓意深刻。
纵观山东省自2009年以来的高考作文命题，不难发现，山东卷常常以含义丰富的某句话或某件事物来命题。2009年要求考生理解“春来草自青”的含义，2010年要抓住题目中的关键字“光和影”，而2012年则以孙中山的警句出题，对学生能力要求进一步提高。
今年的作文题目，总体来讲，偏向简单化，为考生提高供多个可入手着笔的关键词，作答时只要沉住气，耐心审题，作文一定能发挥出较好的水平。
题目从日常生活中最常见的“窗”切入，通过提示不同人透过窗看到的不同风景，设置作文的突破点。考生注意发散思维，多角度全方位地思考“窗”的含义，联系生活中与此相近的事物，充分发挥想象，解读其含义。牢牢抓住这一点，构思作文就容易的多。
二、开放作文：颠覆传统，鼓励自由发挥
篇二：高考作文辅导
范文一
假定你是李华，正在一所英国学校学习暑期课程，遇到一些困难，希望得到学校辅导中心(Learning Center)的帮助。根据学校规定，你需书面预约，请按下列要点写一封信：
1.本人简介；
2.求助内容；
3.约定时间；
4.你的联系方式（Email：lihua@1236. com; Phone：12345678）。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯：
3.结束语已为你写好。
Dear Sir / Madam，
Look forward to your reply.
范文二
某校英文报开辟了一个专栏：Experience。本期话题是如何解决学习中遇到的困难。请你以“My Approach to Difficulties in Learning”为题，用英语写一篇短文，谈谈自己的一些做法。 要求：1.词数100左右；
2.文中不能出现本人相关信息。
范文三
假定你是中学生李华。在一位名叫Tiger Mom的学生家长的博客上，你看到如下内容。请你根据博客内容、写作要点和要求，给这位家长回复。
I'm the mother of a fourteen-year-old. I have a rule for my daughter: be among the top5 students or get punished in one way or another. She has been doing very well in school, but some friends of mine keep telling me that I put too much pressure on her. Am I wrong?
写作要点：
1．表明自己的看法；
2．陈述自己的理由（可举例说明）；
3．提出至少两条建议。
要求：
1．短文词数不少于100（不含已写好的部分）。
2．内容充实，结构完整，语意连贯。
3．书写须清晰、工整。
Hi，TigerMom，
What puzzles you is actually a puzzle for many parents in China. My idea is
范文四
请根据以下提示，结合你校园生活中的一个事例，就与人合作这一话题，用英语写一篇短文。
Working in groups at school is an opportunity to learn more about teamwork. Teamwork shows us how otherpeople's roles fit the purpose of the group, and it teaches us to be patient and how to respond to different people.
注意：①无须写标题，不得照抄英语提示语；
②除诗歌外，文体不限；
③内容必须结合校园生活中的一个事例；
④文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称；
⑤词数为100左右。
范文五
假设你是星光中学的李华，将参加主题为“Let's Ride Bicycles”的英语演讲比赛。请撰写一份演讲稿，主要内容包括：
1．目前汽车带来的空气污染和交通堵塞等问题；
2．骑自行车的益处，如节能环保、有利健康等，
参考词汇：低碳生活(low-carbon life)；节能(energy saving)
注意：1.词数：120词左右；
2.演讲稿开头和结尾已给出，且该部分不计入总词数。
Good morning, everyone,
I am Li Hua from Xingguang Middle School. The topic of my speech is “Let’s Ride Bicycle” Thank you!
范文六
下面这幅照片展现了女儿为回家的妈妈拿包的情景。请根据你对这幅照片的理解用英语写一篇短文。
你的短文应包含以下内容：
1．描述照片内容，如情景、人物、动作，等等；
2．结合自身实际，谈谈你的感想；
3．举例说明你能为家长减负做些什么。
注意：l.可参照图中文字及下面文章开头所给提示，作必要的发挥想象。
2．词数I50左右。开头已经写好，不计入总词数。
3．作文中不得提及考生所在学校和本人姓名。
The burden of students has been a hot topic for years, but the load of parents has received little attention, especially from their own children.
范文七
假设你是李华，你的美国朋友Tom上个月来到北京学习。七月份你将去北京参加暑期中学生英语演讲比赛(speech contest)，你在资料搜集、语言运用等方面遇到了困难。请根据以下要点给Tom写一封电子邮件：
1．询问Tom的生活和学习情况；
2．谈谈你的困难并请Tom帮忙；
3．告诉Tom你打算赛后去看他。
注意：1．词数：120-150：
2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
范文八
假定你是李华，将于今年七月从新星外语学校毕业。你从报纸上得知B&B公司要招聘一名英文秘书，你很感兴趣。请给该公司写一封求职信，包括下列要点：
1．年龄；
2．学习情况及英语水平；
3．兴趣和特长；
4．性格特点。
注意：1．词数100左右；
2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯：
3．开头语和结束语已为你写好。
Dear Sir/Madam,
I learned from the newspaper that your company needs an English secretary.
…
I'm looking forward to your reply.
Sincerely yours,
Li Hua
范文九
假设你是高中生李越，有感于校园中存在的随意涂写（to scribble）和乱丢垃圾( to litter)的行为，请用英语给校长写一封100-120个词的信。信中应包括以下内容：
1．说明写信目的；
2．对这些行为进行批评；
3．提出建议。
注意：信的抬头、落款及信的第一句已给出（不计词数）。
June 8, 2013
Dear Mr. Headmaster,
I am Li Yue, a student from Class l, Senior II.
Yours faithfully,
Li Yue
范文十
请根据下面提示，写一篇短文。词数不少于50。
In your spoken English class, your teacher shows you the following picture. You are asked to describe the picture and explain how you understand it
范文背诵
范文一
Dear Sir/Madam,
I'm Li Hua, a Chinese student taking summer courses in your university. I'm writing to ask for help. I came here last month and found my courses interesting. But I have some difficulties in taking notes and I have no idea of how to use the library. I was told the Learning Center provides help for students and I'm anxious to get help- from you. I have no class on Tuesday mornings and Friday afternoons. Please let me know which day is OK with you. You may email or phone me. Here are my email address and phone number:lihua@1236. com; 12345678.
Look forward to your reply.
Yours ,
Li Hua
范文二
My Approach to Difficulties in Learning
As high school students, we run into one difficulty after another in the process of learning. Everyone has their own way to deal with them. Here I would like to share mine.
When I am faced with a difficulty, I usually choose to refer to relevant learning materials or Web pages. In this way, I can not only work it out but also improve my ability to overcome problems all by myself
However, when it is something beyond my competence, I turn to my classmates or teachers for help. Sometimes I also ask my parents for advice. As a result, I have made steady progress in my studies. 范文三
Hi, Tiger Mom,
What puzzles you is actually a puzzle for many parents in, China. My idea is that it is not quite right for you to do so.
Although high grades are, an important factor in evaluating students and for their future university admission, development in wisdom, emotion, health, and life attitude should never be ignored. There are many examples around us. Some all-A students in school have turned out not to be as successful in society as they were expected. The reason is often that the pressure from their parents allows them almost no time for other activities. Furthermore, punishment is by no means a wise choice to help them grow up mentally and physically.
So I suggest that you take your friends' advice. More importantly, let her live like a lovely girl; let her have more friends and social activities; and let her make mistakes of her own as we teenagers often do.
范文四
Years of school life has taught me a lot of things, of which teamwork is the most important for me. In fact, I didn't realize its importance until I was chosen monitor of my class in my senior middle school. At first, I did most of the duties myself while other students cared little about class activities. As a result, I was tired out and depressed. Then I turned to my teacher and he advised me to cooperate with others. Thus I began to recognize the strengths of my classmates and have everyone do their part in class.
It is working in teams instead of on my own that has freed me of trouble and made my work more efficient.
范文五
Good morning, everyone,
I am Li Hua from Xingguang Middle School, The topic of my speech is “Let's Ride Bicycles”. As is known to all, with the improvement of people's living standards, cars have become a popular means of transport, bringing great convenience to our life. However, they have also caused some problems such as air pollution and traffic jams.
How can we solve the problems then? As far as I'm concerned, riding bicycles is a good solution. For one thing, bicycles don't need any petrol and they are energy-saving. For another, bicycles are environmentally friendly because they won't give off waste gas. What’s more, riding bicycles is a good way for us to exercise and it is beneficial to our health.
Therefore, let's take the responsibility to build up a low-carbon city by riding bicycles. Come on and join us!
Thank you !
范文六
The burden of students has been, a hot topic for years, but the load of parents has received little attention, especially from their own children.
The picture shows us a touching moment when a little girl comes to greet her working mom. Realizing her mom must be very tired after a day's work, the girl helps to remove the bag from her shoulder. In response, the mom kneels down to show how happy and thankful she feels. All this reminds me of my mother who has been doing whatever she could to let me have the best. But, totally engaged in my own study, I seldom pay attention to what my mother needs and feels, and always think studying well is the only thing I could do in return. Now I know I can do my bit to help with the everyday washing, bedroom cleaning, or at least prepare breakfast myself, so as to share mother's daily burden. The picture convinces me it is even more important to be a good daughter than a “good” student.
范文七
Dear Tom,
How time flies ! You have been studying in Beijing for nearly a month, during which you must have achieved a lot. Well, how's everything going? It is reported that the weather there is very hot and dry these days, which is very different from that of your country. Have you adapted to it? In addition, you once complained that the food served there was not to your taste. I hope that should have been improved.
I am glad to tell you that I will go to Beijing to take part in an English speech contest in July, which is not only an honor, but also a great opportunity for me to improve myself. And now I try my best to make preparations for it. However, I have some trouble in collecting relevant materials and using the language. I will appreciate it if you give me a hand to solve the problems.
篇三：2016高考作文全面辅导
2016高考英语作文全面辅导
（高分万能句子、经典名句汇总、高考作文优秀范文及针对训练、预测2016高考作文话题含范文）
目录
第一部分 高考英语作文高分万能句子
常用词组及句型
引出话题句子
引出观点句子
结尾万能句
提出建议万能句
预示后果万能句
论证万能句
给出原因万能句
解决办法万能句
批判错误观点万能句
连接万能句
第二部分 高考英语作文经典名句与句式汇总
是非问题分析论证句式
逻辑问题分析论证句式
核心句型（开头、正文、结尾）
第三部分 高考作文优秀范文及针对训练（配范文） 记叙文写作
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针对训练：
说明文写作
针对练习
议论文写作
针对练习
应用文写作
一、书信
针对训练
二、通知
针对训练
三、日记
针对训练
四、演讲稿
针对训练
五、说明书
图表分析文写作
针对训练
情景作文写作
开放作文写作
第四部分 预测2016高考英语作文话题
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