篇一：高考英语二轮 作文品析2 附参考范文
陕西延长县2016高考英语（二轮）作文品析（2）附参考范文
【2016高考训练题】书面表达 (满分25分)
假设你是王林，寒假期间你要到伦敦旅游，请你根据以下提示给你的英国好友Alex写一封信，
请他推荐一个旅馆，要点如下：
1 介绍你伦敦之行的目的；
2 停留时间：5个晚上，从2月8日到12日；
3 房间要求：预定一个房间，房间不一定很大，但要有浴室；可以上网；
注意：词数100左右；可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Alex,
________________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________
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Dear Alex,
How is everything going recently? I am writing to you in the hope that you can recommend a
hotel to me.
To experience different cultures and broaden my horizons, I will visit London during the winter
holiday. When I am staying there, I want a single room with a private bathroom for five nights, from
Feb 8 to Feb 12. I hope that the hotel you recommend to me should be located near the bus station so
that I can take a bus conveniently. In addition, to keep in touch with my family and friends, I hope I
can gain access to the internet in the room.
I would appreciate it if you could help me. I am looking forward to your early reply.
接连发生的酒后驾驶致死案，引发了社会的高度关注。2009年8月15日起，全国行动，重拳
整治“醉驾”，各地出台措施，狠扎醉驾痛穴。请你根据以下内容，以Treasure Our Lives为题
在你个人博客上发表文章，奉劝司机朋友们珍爱生命，切莫酒后驾车。
案例：2009年6月30日，南京司机醉驾撞车，5死4伤。
呼吁：关爱生命、社会、家人；拒绝酒后驾车；自我防范
措施：考生自拟(至少两项措施)
参考词汇：醉驾drunk driving；路人 pedestrian
写作时注意格式，词数100左右。开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Treasure Our Lives
With the number of cars increasing in cities, traffic accidents occur frequently, calling serious
attention across the globe and becoming a major concern in our society today.
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Treasure Our Lives
With the number of cars increasing in cities, traffic accidents occur frequently, calling serious
attention across the globe and becoming a major concern in our society today.
On June 30, drunk driving in Nanjing resulted in five deaths and four injuries. Such traffic accidents
have not only killed many people but also ruined the life of many others. Harmonious society calls
for people to treasure their lives as well as their family and the society itself. Drivers must obey the
laws and say “no” to drunk driving.
To our relief, some laws and regulations have been worked out to punish those who drive after
drinking. However, I believe that more can be done to prevent things from getting worse. For one
thing, severe punishment should be carried out without mercy. For another, the sale of alcohol
should be limited in restaurants.
For the sake of safety, pedestrians can never be too careful while crossing streets and all people
should never run red lights. Only when everybody obeys traffic rules can we enjoy a happier life.
2016书面表达训练
某校校园网准备为高三毕业生开辟一个英语专栏，现面向全校征稿。请你以“An
unforgettable experience in my high school”为题，用英语写一篇短文，记述自己高中课余生活
中的一件有意义的事并谈谈感想。
注意：1.开头已为你写好， 不计入总词数；
2.词数120左右。
An unforgettable experience in my high school
How time flies! It will be only a month before I graduate from high school . But there are some
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An unforgettable experience in my high school
How time flies! It will be only a month before I graduate from high school. But there are some
experiences I will never forget. Here I would like to share some with you. In recent years, the school
clubs are developing vigorously and I also joined one of them, the writing brush calligraphy interest
group.
Every Thursday after school, we gather in our school library. After being handed out paper,
writing brushes and ink, we begin to observe the teacher’s demonstration attentively, and imitate
every character written on the blackboard. Sometimes we have a heated discussion to learn from
each other among the group members , and every week we copy out some ancient poems.
In the past three years, I have made great progress in writing with a brush .Some of my
assignments have been exhibited and I was often praised by my teachers. In a word, not only does
the calligraphy practice give me a lot of physical and mental pleasure, but also offers me a chance to
have a better understanding of traditional culture.
【2014陕西省商南县高级中学高三上二模】
书面表达（满分30分）
假定你是李华。你的笔友Jane最近因为学业繁重，身体感到不适，严重影响了学习。因
此，她发e-mail给你，寻求你的帮助。请你根据以下要点提示予以回复。
写作要点：1．合理的饮食；2．适度的锻炼；3．充足的睡眠。4. ．．．．．．
注意： 1．短文词数不少于100；2．开头和结尾部分已写好，不计入总词数；
3．可根据情况增减细节，详略得当；
Dear Jane,
I’m sorry to hear that you are feeling ill these days.
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篇二：高考英语二轮 作文品析3 附参考范文
陕西延长县2016高考英语（二轮）作文品析（3）附参考范文
【2016高考训练题】书面表达（满分25分）
假设你是李华， 你的加拿大朋友Bob 给你发了一封电子邮件，想了解一下中国高中生对于大
学的选择意向，于是你在班里进行了一次调查。请根据下表的信息，给Bob 回复一封电子邮
件，告诉他调查结果，并说明原因。
2.电子邮件的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Bob,
Last week I did a survey among the students in my class on what university they want to
choose.
Yours,
Li Hua
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Dear Bob,
Last week I did a survey among the students in my class on what university they want to choose.
Now I’m writing to tell you the results.
Twenty-five percent of my classmates want to choose universities in our province. They say they
are more likely to be admitted if they apply to these universities. And they needn’t change their
lifestyle too much. Seventy percent of them would like to choose universities in other provinces.
Being away from home, they can become more independent and there are more universities for them
to choose from. The rest five percent of my classmates plan to choose foreign universities. One
reason why they want to go abroad is that they can learn more about different cultures. Besides, it
will be a great help to their foreign language study.
Yours,
Li Hua
假设你校在举办征文活动，题目为“How to Overcome Test Anxiety ”，请你用英语写一篇短文，谈谈你自己的具体做法，以供同学们借鉴。
注意：1.词数100左右。
2．做法不少于四点。
3．参考词汇：well-prepared, take a deep breath, positive thoughts, concentrate on, repeat
4．开头已给出。
Whoever takes exams will feel more or less tense and anxious...
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How to Overcome Test Anxiety
Whoever takes exams will feel more or less tense and anxious.So how to overcome test anxiety is very important and a problem in desperate want of being solved. Personally, the following may be of help to you.
First, make sure that you're well-prepared for the exam, which will make you feel confident that you can do it. Second, once you take your seat, take a few minutes to relax, such as letting your arms hang loosely, moving your fingers as well as taking a few deep breaths. Third, push away the negative thoughts and turn them into positive ones. Fourth, concentrating on the exam may also benefit you a lot and don't pay attention to the people around you. Besides, if you are sitting for an oral exam, smile a lot and imagine you are having the nicest conversation in a long time. Of course, when you start feeling tense and anxious again during the exam, repeating the exercise to relax yourself is essential.
【2014界黑龙江省哈三中高三上第三次验收考试】
书面表达（满分25分）
假设你是张林，你班来自英国的交流学生John因病住院已两周，请你用英文给他写封信，
主要内容包括：
1. 询问病情，表示关切；
2. 介绍班级近期活动，学习等情况；
3. 表达祝愿。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.信的格式已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear John,
____________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________ Yours,
Zhang Lin
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Dear John,
How are you getting along these days? It’s two weeks since you went to hospital. And we’re informed that you are diagnosed with a severe disease and have to be in hospital for a period of time. We are concerned about your health and miss you much. The students are engaged in reviewing lessons. We’ve had an exam and the majority of us have made progress steadily. Surrounded by an academic atmosphere, we encourage each other and spare no effort. Don’t worry about your studies, we assure you that we’ll help you to make up for the lessons you missed.
Cheer up! We are convinced and confident that you can overcome the disease and be with us soon. We are waiting for your backward!
Best wishes!
Yours Zhang Lin
篇三：高考英语二轮 作文品析5 附参考范文
陕西延长县2016高考英语（二轮）作文品析（5）附参考范文
【2016高考训练题】写作 (满分25分)
距离高考剩下不到一年的时间了，紧张的高考备考已经拉开序幕，但是很多同学还不知如何处理学习、健身和休息与高考备考之间的关系。请根据图
中的内容写一篇英语短文，谈一谈你对这一问题的建议。
注意：
1．词数100字左右，开头语已为你写好，
2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
How to Get Prepared for the College Entrance Exams
We are going to attend the College Entrance Exams in less than one
year. ___________________
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How to Get Prepared for the College Entrance Exams
We are going to attend the College Entrance Exams in less than one year. However, many students still don’t know how to coordinate their study, rest and physical exercise when preparing for the Exams. They usually devote too much time to their study, which results in poor health and low efficiency of learning.
As the proverb goes, early to bed and early to rise makes a man healthy, wealthy and wise. We’d better leave ourselves enough time to sleep since it enables us to learn our lessons more efficiently. What’s more, a strong and healthy body is the base for our further study and our future work and creative activities.
Therefore, as we are preparing for the Exams, don’t forget.
假设你是某中学学生李明，请你给在美国的网友Mike写一封信，
告诉他你的一次难忘的聚会，
主要内容如下：
1．简述与朋友或同学的难忘的聚会；
2．描述当时聚会的情况；
3．谈谈自己的体会和感受。
注意：
1．词数不少于120(信的开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数)；
2．可适当发挥想象，增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3．文中不得出现与本人及学校相关的任何真实信息。
Dear Mike，
I have been interested in the adventurous and colorful stories you told me in your school
time.___________________________________ ____________________________________ Hoping to get your early reply.
Sincerely yours，
Li Ming
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Dear Mike，
I have been interested in the adventurous and colorful stories you told me in your school time. Now I will tell you something of my own to share with you. It is an unforgettable party in my life which happened in my high school.
On a snowy day, owing to a careless slip on my way to school I fell onto the ground, only to find that my feet were seriously hurt. I was told by the doctor to lie in bed for one month or so, which deeply frustrated me. Still more disappointedly, my classmates and I had planned a trip to Dongjiang Lake Park to celebrate my birthday the following Sunday. However, my plan melted into the air. There was no doubt that I would have a lonely and boring birthday.
To my surprise, on the afternoon of my birthday, several classmates turned up in my home with a bunch of flowers and wonderful gifts. We had a merry chat, singing karaoke and playing cards. All of us were bubbling over with enthusiasm. When they were leaving, they wished me a speedy recovery. I was deeply touched by their thoughtfulness and kindness, and the impressive birthday party will stick in my mind forever. Isn't it moving and unforgettable?
Hoping to get your early reply.
Sincerely yours，
Li Ming
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近年来，由于全球环境日渐恶化，自然灾害频繁发生，给人们的生命与财产带来了极大的危害。假如你是高中学生李华，就此事向报社写一篇英语文章，呼吁人们从自我做起，保护环境，爱惜生命，使我们居住的环境得到彻底的改善。
要求：1.可适当增加细节以使行文流畅。
2．词数：100左右。
________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ One possible version：
Dear Editor，
More and more disasters have taken place on end recently，which have brought in many deaths and loss. It's high time we realized the importance of protecting our environment. I am strongly appealing to people acting for our surroundings.
People always take a lot from the earth, for example, cutting more trees for houses，digging more mines for a better life, giving more green house gases into the air and so on. High carbon life makes people comfortable and high technology makes people warring. All this makes our life more difficult and our earth not easy to live on.
It is everyone's duty to protect our environment. I hope everyone should play a role in making our earth easier to live on. Do from now on. More giving，less taking and greed so as to make our environment more beautiful.
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
【2016高考训练】书面表达 （满分25分）
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