English writing 英语书面表达训练(书信类)教学设计
Teaching aims
Help the students to develop their writing ability
Teaching difficult point
How to develop their writing ability
Teaching tools
A projector, PowerPoint
Teaching methods
Discussion, group work and exercise practice
Teaching steps
Step I Introduction1
Show them what kinds of writings the teachers like and dislike to attract their attention
高考阅卷老师喜欢的作文：
1.语言简洁、层次清晰
2.选词准确、句式多变
3.内容连贯、表达地道
4.书写规范、卷面整洁
高考阅卷老师讨厌的作文：
1.语言繁琐、层次不清
2.词汇错误、句式单一
3.表达不清、汉式英语
4.书写潦草、无法辨认
Step 2 introduction2
Show them the techniques to write a good writing.
1、扬长避短
写句子时努力克服“缺胳膊
少腿”、“画蛇添足”、
“张冠李戴”、“乱点鸳鸯”、
“生搬硬套”和“瞻前不顾后”
等错误。
“缺胳膊少腿”类
However, other students against the idea of visiting Internet bars.
(缺少谓语, 在against 前加are)
I thought the lonely bird on my way to school.
(缺少介词,在thought后加of)
“画蛇添足”类
But there are 60% of the students are against the idea of playing too much computer games.
(去掉there are, 或在第二个 are前加关系代词who。)
“乱点鸳鸯”类
. Playing computer games for a long time makes a bad effect on our study and health.
动宾不当, 把makes改为has
2、显示文采
A. 有效使用复合句 B.多种句型交替使用 C. 准确使用句与句之间的连接成分
常用的连接词汇有：
(1)表顺序：first, then, finally, the former, the latter 等
(2)表转折：but, however, on the contrary, instead, nevertheless, yet 等。
(3)表递进：what’s more, besides, even, moreover, furthermore 等。
(4)表因果：so, therefore, as a result, because of, due to, owing to, thanks to, on
account of 等。
(5)表总结：as you know, as far as I’m concerned, generally speaking, in a word, in all, in short等。
(6)表对比：on one hand, on the other, while等。
3、展示个性
所谓展示个性就是与众不同，特别表现在词汇的选取和运用上。新的评分标准要求我们尽量使用高级词汇。所谓高级词汇并不是越难越好，越长越好。主要是指那些大部分同学都想不到的表达方式，也就是与众不同啦。
例如：
1.She knows English well.
She has a good knowledge of English.
She feels at home in English.
(at home:得心应手。)
2. English is becoming more and more important.
English is becoming increasingly important.
4. 亮而出
A 书写规范 卷面整洁
B亮的开头，好的结尾。
不论采用什么形式开头，都不要在前几句就暴露出自己的弱点，如基础
性的单词拼写错误、语法错误，这样会
直接影响阅卷人的情绪。
结尾时要有总结性的句子，应简洁，不要拖泥带水。
Step 3 analyzing
假如你是李华，你的网友Alee和她的好友都去了舟曲县做志愿者，期间她们吵架了，不知道该怎么办，给你写了一封信，对你讲了这件事。请你给Alee写一封慰问信，并给她提出一些建议。
注意： 1.词数：120左右
2.可适当发挥想象，以使行文通顺 连贯
词汇热身
Be____to hear 遗憾地听说
Have a fight/ quarrel ______sb.
______sb. Very much.让某人心烦
————a loss 不知道，茫然
Clear things————解决问题，澄清误会
——have problems 曾经出现一些问题
Give——the friendship 放弃友谊
————sb。避开某人
With all your heart and ————全心全意地
句子翻译：
1.你没有必要担心，这是朋友之间是常有的事情
You needn’t worry too much about it, because it is very common among friends.
2.我建议你不要理睬所发生的事情
I suggest that you just ignore things that have happened..
3.必要的话向你的朋友道歉，或者对面谈一谈
It is necessary for you to apologize to your friend or have a word with her face to face.
Step 4 Modeling
Show the students the sample writing
Dear Alee,
I am sorry to hear that you had a fight with your best friend and that you are at a loss what to do. This may upset you very much, but actually, you needn’t worry too much about it, because it is very common among friends. I used to have problems with my best friend, but we cleared things up and we are still good friends.
what I want to suggest to you is that you just ignore what has happened. To be honest, I don’t think your best friend will give up the friendship just because of one fight. Instead of avoiding her, you should talk to her and tell her what’s really on your mind. I believe that if you are honest and tell each other how you feel, everything will be settled. Besides, you’d better make an apology to your friend if necessary or talk with her face to face.
All in all, it is never easy to make true friends, so protect them with all your heart.
Best wishes!
Yours
Li Hua
Step 5 summarizing
• 审题，抓点
• 造句，成文
• 改错，誉写
Step 6 Homework
近年来，有毒奶粉、乱用食品添加剂等现象引起了人们对食品安全问题的广泛关注，为此你校(宁溪中学)“英语角”安排了一次活动。请根据下列要点提示，给当地市长写一封信，表达对食品安全问题的关心。
书信要点如下：
1.听到奶粉有毒、面粉中乱加添加剂等事件时的心情;
2.对其他食品质量的担心
3.就食品安全问题至少给市长提出两条建议
4.自己的看法
注意： 词数120左右 书信开头已经给出，不计入总词数
参考词汇：奶粉milk powder 添加剂：addictive
Dear Mayor,
how are you ? I am a senior student of Ningxi Senior School.
…….
yours
Li Hua
《English writing 英语书面表达训练(书信类)教学设计》出自：百味书屋
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